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The couple had just about finished setting up their new house beside the church. It was their first day at the mass and the service had just ended.

Shaking with disbelief, they took the sight in. It was true, after all.

All the rumors!

“Oh God, how could we have been so distrusting!”

“Everybody, everybody, was telling us the same thing and we were adamant on our new-world, scientific, practical ways of thinking.”

And so they continued, horrorstruck eyes glued to the church window while the spirits of the two girls who had died in that home pranced about in the adjacent cemetery.

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Time for Friday Fictioneers again!

© Ankita Kala 2015

9 Comments Add yours

  1. Dear Ankita,

    Some people have to find things out for themselves, don’t they?

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Ankita says:

      Dear Rochelle,
      That can prove itself dangerous too, isn’t it so?
      Thanks,
      Ankita

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  2. Liz Young says:

    You’d think their proximity to the church would settle the spirits!

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    1. Ankita says:

      I hope they are kind spirits 🙂

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  3. Well at least they are in the cemetery where they belong.

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    1. Ankita says:

      Yes! That’s a relief!

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  4. It could we worse I suppose! Nice one.

    Visit Keith’s Ramblings!

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    1. Ankita says:

      True. Thanks for your appreciation 🙂

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